amazing work my beautiful friend.

With my 2 hours of sleeping, i'm not sure am right to think anything good, but i think this is a real excellent work.
Just perhaps that too much (ahhh, i'm asleep, that's not good, and me have a 10 hours working day now) there are too much blurred areas, some are good, like the stairs, and having the girl detailed is excellent, but in the whole pic... this is too much blurred, even if it's not your fault, because the subject need it by default.
But that's not very important because the idea is so powerful, that even if there were a little mistakes (don't know where, but there might be some i think), there are masked by the originality and the (aaahhhhhhhmmm) and the global idea(i think am repeating, but that's not a problem because i've finished). Less technical than some your other works, but i like it very much. (i love it).
(perhaps that the contrast between the two colors is too much, perhaps that with some other blue things in the background or something like that... no that's great like this... but perhaps if a little work with the colors and....no that's ok... right....shut up stupid mind).
Oh no, i've put a huge inconsistant comment, sorry . Like this a lot.

this is a DOODLE?! fuckit! I would love to be able to DRAW like this!! Stunning work, I love the colors and smoke and the moon and the little girl and... bugger it... everything! It's awesome!

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thanks for dropping by... yea i got board and had no will to start anything serious, so this spewed from my mind in a night's legth of time.

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even though this is little more the a lukewarm work i do am proud of it now that you like it.

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its quite alright. i see what you mean by some aspects of the image being blurry. i dont mind i had little time to refine them further and i think they read fine just as they are. again this is more of a work for myself, i didnt draw anything for a while and i thought it would be a good time to do something. anything.

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you twisted bastard
Like your dream/nightmare.

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well... it's a stunning spew.. er... or something like that

Love it.

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I prefer good ideas than just technical stuff, this one is a good idea, so i like it. My comment was just a kind of report, not an order , the blurry effect did not frighten me. Feel like you want to, live with your ideas and try what you want, this is best for you and us. I think that you mustn't justify your choices like if we were judges, they are what you are and this make some cool things. Real critics are really needed by noobs, because they must find the way on how to think to improve their work by themselves, once they got it, they can live their ideas too.
Please don't forget to think about us and to make a lot lot of more paintings !!!